Comments on: Manifesto Draft 2 http://logoscommunities.org/communityblog/2006/09/08/manifesto-draft-2/ a dialog on finding out what it's like living in community for the kingdom of God today Sun, 01 Aug 2010 10:50:15 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.0.2 by: Elisa http://logoscommunities.org/communityblog/2006/09/08/manifesto-draft-2/#comment-21 Fri, 15 Sep 2006 16:20:17 +0000 http://logoscommunities.org/communityblog/2006/09/08/manifesto-draft-2/#comment-21 Thanks for keeping up with this! Its looking awesome!!! I found a small thing is all--I noticed a typo: "Living indicates an authentic commitment to the lifestyle a of a disciple" Very nice! I like how's it coming along! Thanks for keeping up with this! Its looking awesome!!! I found a small thing is all–I noticed a typo: “Living indicates an authentic commitment to the lifestyle a of a disciple”
Very nice! I like how’s it coming along!

]]> by: nate http://logoscommunities.org/communityblog/2006/09/08/manifesto-draft-2/#comment-20 Thu, 14 Sep 2006 22:18:06 +0000 http://logoscommunities.org/communityblog/2006/09/08/manifesto-draft-2/#comment-20 Ok, I have added a paragraph that underlines the Love of God. I worked some on where to place it. The simple fact is ... almost everything flows from the Love of God we have experianced. So I just could not see adding that as just another value. ... So thanks for the comments, Ian, Elisa, and Maegan, and others ... I also tweaked the section on Community to get rid of the not this or that. It made Clint nervous in the first draft and others nervous later. It just does not fit the tone of the document. I still wish the hospitality and food sections had a bit more work, but can't pinpoint why. Anyone got objections that might clairify my admittedly nebulous feelings? Nate Ok, I have added a paragraph that underlines the Love of God. I worked some on where to place it. The simple fact is … almost everything flows from the Love of God we have experianced. So I just could not see adding that as just another value. … So thanks for the comments, Ian, Elisa, and Maegan, and others …

I also tweaked the section on Community to get rid of the not this or that. It made Clint nervous in the first draft and others nervous later. It just does not fit the tone of the document.

I still wish the hospitality and food sections had a bit more work, but can’t pinpoint why. Anyone got objections that might clairify my admittedly nebulous feelings?

Nate

]]> by: maegan http://logoscommunities.org/communityblog/2006/09/08/manifesto-draft-2/#comment-18 Sat, 09 Sep 2006 15:27:45 +0000 http://logoscommunities.org/communityblog/2006/09/08/manifesto-draft-2/#comment-18 Nate-- this is great. It's really a good thing to have someone who can articulate all of our thoughts and desires into words. I think that the section under COMMUNITY (thats being a hard thing to define) it really mentions what we are NOT, and maybe this is where we can define more what we ARE. This is possibly the section to explain that we are based in the LOVE of GOD and the ways of JESUS. What do u say? just some ideas. thanx for putting your all into this...maegan Nate–
this is great. It’s really a good thing to have someone who can articulate all of our thoughts and desires into words. I think that the section under COMMUNITY (thats being a hard thing to define) it really mentions what we are NOT, and maybe this is where we can define more what we ARE. This is possibly the section to explain that we are based in the LOVE of GOD and the ways of JESUS. What do u say? just some ideas.

thanx for putting your all into this…maegan

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