I also tweaked the section on Community to get rid of the not this or that. It made Clint nervous in the first draft and others nervous later. It just does not fit the tone of the document.
I still wish the hospitality and food sections had a bit more work, but can’t pinpoint why. Anyone got objections that might clairify my admittedly nebulous feelings?
Nate
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